I think this looks pretty good. I don't like the expensive R3 as it takes 150k off the field that should be scoring for you. I also think Grundy, Cripps and Marshall are three important starting picks that you've missed out on. If it were my team I'd change Neale, Gawn, Hickey ($1,734,300) to Cripps, Grundy, Marshall ($1,729,100) (Treacy to R3). You get an extra premo out of it, which saves on trades, and I'd be surprised if it didn't score significantly better (I'd have Cripps within ~10 of Neale, Grundy within ~5 of Gawn and Marshall about +50 on a rookie, making for a ~35 advantage). Some of that may be o***et by captaincy factor but I doubt it will be strong enough to even things out.